Eric,
I think that this is a very solid post on Marvin Gaye. It seems as though you have hit on all of the
necessary criteria for this assignment.
Your sentences are clear and concise and you have appropriate paragraph
breaks for separate ideas. Your grammar
and punctuation is on point, and your ideas flow well from one to the
other. I really like how you use great
adjectives when describing his music, which makes it fun and exciting to
read. Overall, I thought that you did
great on this post. Keep up the great
work and I hope to be reading more great material from you in the future!
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